Love the intro pluck
Nice soothing melody
Bad piano synth(also sounds offbeat)
Its hard to judge if this was intended as a loop or not considering the length of the track. If not then its a bit repetitive but you listed it as a loop so I would imagine it is intended as such. I like where the Loop is headed how ever I still feel there should be a variety and more uplifting and or ambient synths used. I love the melody but let down by the piano and the kick. A lot of potential in this track though. Keep up the good work.Check out our new track and let us know what you think. 3/5 5/5
Thanks for the in-depth review! I'm a total noob at making music, just a side hobby when i'm not working. lol. Check out my other songs! I'd love to hear your thoughts! (most of them are repitive though...)
Liked the chill, ambient touch
Nice choice of kicks and loops(unless made from scratch)
Like the buildup around 2:18 to the drop(Beautiful)
Drums were kickass
Random sounds and fx don't really fit in with the intro and drown out the melody making it somewhat annoying.
01:37 bad synth choice and I would fix the lead(seems a little mediocre)
Ok so I saw a lot of things in this song, both good and bad. They are all listed above. This song can be a hit if you would tweak a few things. Your transitioning was pretty well done and i thought the intro and outro were done well also. Your intro however besides the problems I listed above was a tad bit long, It seemed it took up the majority of the song. Your song gets a little repetitive towards the end up until the outro. I would try and mix it up in between. Other than tht this was a good track and I look forward to hear more from you. Check out our new track and let us know what you think. 3/5 5/5
Ill try to calm a little bit with the sfx during melody sections to give it a little more boost.
I do need a little bit more variation also haha.
Thanks for the help :D
Kept me interested the entire time
Bad Kicks used
Synths could be tweaked a bit
Mastering needs work
Good song, I really liked the upbeat tune. I think this has a lot of potential. Piano melodies are on point. The transition at 03:45 was a very nice touch. I do however find your kicks bland and dont really feel they give the thump that's needed for this song. Other than that it was very good I look forward to hearing more from you I will keep an eye out for future tracks. Check out our new track and tell us what you think if you have the time. 3.5/5 5/5
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